I focussed mainly on brief 3, Typo 12 and brief 4, ISTD Circus for the crit. These are the boards I have prepared:
I asked the following questions and received feedback I received was as follow:
It ws really useful to get feedback actually written on the design sheets, as it was clear what the feedback related to.
The crit itself was really useful as I realised from looking through other people's blogs that my research is very content/product heavy which is a good thing but i need to perhaps strike a balance with visual/contextual research for inspiration design direction.
Liam made a useful observation of having a structure dprogramme of events like at the Royal Armouries.
Basically the feedback about the typefaces has reinforced what I thought ie stay away from the cliches. I am glad the 'overprint' was quite well received as I want to stick with this. I am just goiing to experiment with brighter colours